If I Had Aladdin's Magic Lamp|假如我有阿拉丁神灯

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  许多人都听过阿拉丁与神灯的故事,在故事中,阿拉丁得到一盏神灯,神灯精灵给予他 3 个愿望。请写一篇约 120 150 个单词(words)的英文作文,文分两段,第一段以 The story about Aladdin and the magic lamp is familiar to most people. 为主题句,稍加描述你所知的故事内容,并且假设如果自己是阿拉丁的话会怎么做?第二段则以 First off, I would wish for... 开头并加以发展,叙述自己的愿望会是什么。


写作前后(Pre-writing & Post-writing

  提示的第一句主题句表示阿拉丁与神灯是多数人耳熟能详的故事,接下来可用一两句简短叙述故事内容,最后再带出如果你是获得 3个愿望的主角,会有什么样的想法,此段不宜太过冗长,可把重点放在第二段的愿望描述。


  第二段即可开始列举你想许的愿望,由于文章的题目是虚构的故事,因此愿望内容可较为夸张或天马行空,并且提出许愿的理由,会较有说服力。最后可以表示虽然这些愿望实现的机会不大,但偶尔幻想乃人之常情,作为结论。


第一段引导句:大多人都熟悉阿拉丁与神灯的故事。

The story about Aladdin and the magic lamp is familiar to most people.

第一段发展句:故事是关于一位名叫阿拉丁的人找到了一盏神灯。他磨擦了灯之后,一个精灵蹦了出来并许给他 3 个愿望。

The story is about a young man named Aladdin who finds a magic lamp. After he rubs the lamp, a genie pops out and gives him three wishes.

如果我是阿拉丁,而且拥有神灯的话,我一定会把握住机会,让我的梦想全都成真。

If I were Aladdin and had the magic lamp, I would surely seize the opportunity to make all my dreams come true.


第二段引导句:首先,我会许愿废除所有的考试。

First off, I would wish for all exams to be abolished.


第二段发展句:第二,我会希望我是最有钱的人,这样我就能去环游全世界而不用担心花费。最后,我会希望以后拥有数不清的愿望。

a.  Secondly, I would wish that I were the richest person ever so that I could travel around the world without worrying about the cost.

b.  Lastly, I would wish to have an endless number of wishes in the future.


第二段结论句:虽然许下这些愿望让我听起来很贪心,但偶尔幻想一下是很正常的事。

Making wishes like these sounds greedy of me, but it's natural to fantasize occasionally.


范 文:

The story about Aladdin and the magic lamp is familiar to most people. It tells of a young man named Aladdin who finds a magic lamp. After he rubs the lamp, a genie pops out and grants him three wishes. If I were lucky enough to be Aladdin and have the magic lamp, I would definitely seize the opportunity to make all my dreams come true.


First off, I would wish for all exams to be abolished. Without exams, I wouldn't have so much pressure and could read whatever I wanted. Secondly, I would wish that I were the richest person ever so I could afford to travel around the world. Lastly, I would wish to have an endless number of wishes. While it sounds very greedy of me to make these wishes, it's completely natural to fantasize once in a while.


  大多人都熟悉阿拉丁与神灯的故事。故事的内容是叙述一位名叫阿拉丁的年轻人找到了一盏神灯。他磨擦了灯之后,一个精灵蹦了出来并许给他 3 个愿望。如果我够幸运成为阿拉丁,而且拥有那个神灯的话,我一定会把握住机会,让我的梦想全都成真。


  首先,我会许愿废除所有的考试。没有了考试,我就不会有这么多压力,可以读任何我想读的东西。第二,我会希望我是最有钱的人,这样我就能负担得起环游世界的费用。最后,我会希望能拥有数不清的愿望。虽然许下这些愿望让我听起来很贪心,但偶尔幻想一下是很正常的事。




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If I Had Aladdin's Magic Lamp|假如我有阿拉丁神灯